Scene 15 has changed a little, instead of making Draco look scared as soon as Draak leaves, he looks uncertain as to wheather he is alone and if he should've thrown the ball that far... perhaps a sound effect before he opens an eye...scream or a yelp?
Love the eye opening....think we need a subtle sound that signifies a shift in the mood....mebbe a crow or an owl hoot....gives a feeling of 'alone.'
ReplyDeleteWe'll slow down Draak's exit by perhaps having him point then put hands on hips, then turn and he might even need to roll his eyes as he leaves since he is so close to the audience- ur call on that last one though.....